Angelica Rangel Rangel 1
Period. 3
Ms. Jaeger
World Geography
3 November 2011
Life in the slums
Slums are a very unhealthy way of living. Slums are where many poor people
do not have enough money to pay for rent in an original apartment. Also slums can be a
very dangerous place to live. Although some people just think it is a normal way of
living.
Most slums are a very unhealthy way of living, because of all the chemicals that
might be floating around . Most slums are either flooded or are buried in trash “There are
public toilets and water taps, but sanitation is poor with open sewers along the
alleyways.” pg7 says a person that lives in a slum for example. The slums have very
narrow alley ways so its extremely crowded. Because they have no money to make any
improvements.
Slums are where many poor people live because they do not have enough money
Rangel 2
to pay rent for an original apartment. They have no other place to live besides the slum.
“We have lots of problems because it’s not a place where you can admire to stay, my
dear. You can see your self.” pg.3 says the lady pointing out that its not the best place that
you would want to stay at. They heave no other choice but to live in a filthy place like a
slum. Some people may be living in deadly conditions without even knowing.
Slums can also be a very dangerous place to live because of all the chemicals that
have awful odors and people who live there do not relize if it is dangerous or not because
they are so used to it smelling the same odor everyday.Not knowing that it may affect
them or their brains. As for the liquids the people who live in slums have to use dirty
water tap just do drink.
There for slums are everywhere especially inplaces you leaste expected.Most
slums are overpopulated so the government is tearing them down and wanting to build
apartments with low pay rent but there wouldn’t be enough room for everybody who once
lived int the slums. So they must find another near by slum or migrate to another place to
live.
Tuesday, November 15, 2011
Thursday, November 3, 2011
Angelica Rangel Rangel1
Ms.Jager
World Geography
3 November 2011
Living in poverty, and slums.
Slums are a very unhealthy way of living. Slums are where many poor people live because they don't have enough money to pay for rent in an original apartment. Also slums can be a very dangerous place to live. Althought some people just think its a normal way of living.
Slums are a very unhealthy way of living, because of all the chemicals that might floating around. Most slums are either flooded or are buried in trash."There are public toilets and water taps, but sanitation is poor with open sewers along the alleyways." Pg7 For example The slums have very narrow alley ways so its extremely narrow. Because they have no money to make any improvements.
Slums are where many poor people live because they don't have enough money to pay for rent in an original apartment. They have no other place to live besides the slum. "We have lots of problems because it's is not a place where you can admire to stay, my dear. You can see your self." pg.3 they have no other choice but to live in a filthy place like a slum. Some people may be living in deadly conditions with out even knowing.
Slums can also be a very dangerous place to live because of all the chemicals that have awful odors and the people who live there don't even realize if it is dangerous or not because they are so used to it smelling like that. Not knowing what kind of oders might be dangerouse for them or any liquids.
There for slums are everywhere especially in places you least expected. Most slums are overpopulated so the government is tearing them down and wanting to build apartments with low cost but there still wouldnt be enought room of those who lived in the slums.So they will have to find another near by slum or migrate to another place to live.
Citations:
Fink, Sheri. "Cities of the Poor 1: Life in the Slums (kenya)." Public Radio International :The World (2006). Print.
Blythe, Nils. "BBC NEWS | Business | Mumbai's Slum Life Poses World Problem." BBC News - Home. Web. 04 Nov. 2011. <http://news.bbc.co.uk/2/hi/business/7265333.stm>.
Ms.Jager
World Geography
3 November 2011
Living in poverty, and slums.
Slums are a very unhealthy way of living. Slums are where many poor people live because they don't have enough money to pay for rent in an original apartment. Also slums can be a very dangerous place to live. Althought some people just think its a normal way of living.
Slums are a very unhealthy way of living, because of all the chemicals that might floating around. Most slums are either flooded or are buried in trash."There are public toilets and water taps, but sanitation is poor with open sewers along the alleyways." Pg7 For example The slums have very narrow alley ways so its extremely narrow. Because they have no money to make any improvements.
Slums are where many poor people live because they don't have enough money to pay for rent in an original apartment. They have no other place to live besides the slum. "We have lots of problems because it's is not a place where you can admire to stay, my dear. You can see your self." pg.3 they have no other choice but to live in a filthy place like a slum. Some people may be living in deadly conditions with out even knowing.
Slums can also be a very dangerous place to live because of all the chemicals that have awful odors and the people who live there don't even realize if it is dangerous or not because they are so used to it smelling like that. Not knowing what kind of oders might be dangerouse for them or any liquids.
There for slums are everywhere especially in places you least expected. Most slums are overpopulated so the government is tearing them down and wanting to build apartments with low cost but there still wouldnt be enought room of those who lived in the slums.So they will have to find another near by slum or migrate to another place to live.
Citations:
Fink, Sheri. "Cities of the Poor 1: Life in the Slums (kenya)." Public Radio International :The World (2006). Print.
Blythe, Nils. "BBC NEWS | Business | Mumbai's Slum Life Poses World Problem." BBC News - Home. Web. 04 Nov. 2011. <http://news.bbc.co.uk/2/hi/business/7265333.stm>.
Eaves, Elisabeth. "Two Billion Slum Dwellers - Forbes.com." Information for the World's Business Leaders - Forbes.com. 6th Nov. 2006. Web. 04 Nov. 2011. <http://www.forbes.com/2007/06/11/third-world-slums-biz-cx_21cities_ee_0611slums.html>.
Monday, October 24, 2011
Intro Paragraph:
Slums are a very unhealthy way of living. Slums are where many poor people live because they don't have enough money to pay there rent in an original apartment. Also Slums can be very a dangerous place to live in because of the condition they're in.
Slums are a very unhealthy way of living because of all the chemicals that might be floating around most slums are flooded or nearly buried in trash. "There are public toilets and water taps, but sanitation is poor with open sewers along the alleyways." pg7 The slums are very narrow alley ways which are created by houses less than two feet apart.
Slums are a very unhealthy way of living because of all the chemicals that might be floating around most slums are flooded or nearly buried in trash. "There are public toilets and water taps, but sanitation is poor with open sewers along the alleyways." pg7 The slums are very narrow alley ways which are created by houses less than two feet apart.
Thursday, October 20, 2011
Outline
I. Introductory Paragraph
A.Slums are a very unhealthy way of living. Slums are where many poor people live because they don't have enough money to pay for rent in an original apartment. Also slums can be a very dangerous place to live.
B. Create a strong transition
II. First Supporting Paragraphing
A. Slums are a very unhealthy way of living, because of all the chemicals that might floating around. Most slums are either flooded or are buried in trash.
"There are public toilets and water taps, but sanitation is poor with open sewers along the alleyways." Pg7 For example The slums have very narrow alley ways so its extremely narrow.
B. Transition
III. Second Supporting Paragraph
A. Slums are where many poor people live because they don't have enough money to pay for rent in an original apartment. They have no other place to live besides the slum. "We have lots of problems because it's is not a place where you can admire to stay, my dear. You can see your self." pg.3 they have no other choice but to live in a filthy place like a slum.
B.Transition:
IV. Third supporting paragraph
A.Slums can also be a very dangerous place to live because of all the chemicals that have awful odors and The people who live there don't even realize if it is dangerous or not because of they are so used to it smelling like that.
A.Slums are a very unhealthy way of living. Slums are where many poor people live because they don't have enough money to pay for rent in an original apartment. Also slums can be a very dangerous place to live.
B. Create a strong transition
II. First Supporting Paragraphing
A. Slums are a very unhealthy way of living, because of all the chemicals that might floating around. Most slums are either flooded or are buried in trash.
"There are public toilets and water taps, but sanitation is poor with open sewers along the alleyways." Pg7 For example The slums have very narrow alley ways so its extremely narrow.
B. Transition
III. Second Supporting Paragraph
A. Slums are where many poor people live because they don't have enough money to pay for rent in an original apartment. They have no other place to live besides the slum. "We have lots of problems because it's is not a place where you can admire to stay, my dear. You can see your self." pg.3 they have no other choice but to live in a filthy place like a slum.
B.Transition:
IV. Third supporting paragraph
A.Slums can also be a very dangerous place to live because of all the chemicals that have awful odors and The people who live there don't even realize if it is dangerous or not because of they are so used to it smelling like that.
Thesis
Slums are,....
- a very unhealthy way of living.
- where many poor people live because they don't have enough money to pay for rent in an original apartment.
- Also slums can be a very dangerous place to live.
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