I. Introductory Paragraph
A.Slums are a very unhealthy way of living. Slums are where many poor people live because they don't have enough money to pay for rent in an original apartment. Also slums can be a very dangerous place to live.
B. Create a strong transition
II. First Supporting Paragraphing
A. Slums are a very unhealthy way of living, because of all the chemicals that might floating around. Most slums are either flooded or are buried in trash.
"There are public toilets and water taps, but sanitation is poor with open sewers along the alleyways." Pg7 For example The slums have very narrow alley ways so its extremely narrow.
B. Transition
III. Second Supporting Paragraph
A. Slums are where many poor people live because they don't have enough money to pay for rent in an original apartment. They have no other place to live besides the slum. "We have lots of problems because it's is not a place where you can admire to stay, my dear. You can see your self." pg.3 they have no other choice but to live in a filthy place like a slum.
B.Transition:
IV. Third supporting paragraph
A.Slums can also be a very dangerous place to live because of all the chemicals that have awful odors and The people who live there don't even realize if it is dangerous or not because of they are so used to it smelling like that.
Angie, great job but you need a conclusion and to actually type out your transitions.
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